A Cool Review for Shine in the Guardian

Shine by Candy Gourlay
'A precious and important novel that also explores exile from neighbours, family and country. The book is about reinvention and the faces we present to the world, whether it be in person, on a postcard or on the internet, all wrapped up in an exciting and perfectly paced story with a disturbing and dramatic climax.'
Philip Ardagh, The Guardian
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Monday, 21 November 2011

Great Expectations With SCBWI British Isles

You win a prize, you get to cut the cake! Photo: Sue Eves
I've just come home from a most moving weekend. It was the annual conference of SCBWI British Isles* - an organization of writers and illustrators that has had a huge impact on my creative life.

This year Tall Story won the inaugural Crystal Kite Prize for Europe, the only peer-given prize for children's books.  I was awarded the trophy at the conference and asked to deliver a speech. 

I was also surprised to be given this year's Outstanding Contribution Award. It was particularly poignant for me because last year the prize was won by my friend Margaret Carey, whom we lost to cancer last summer

Receiving the two awards was like getting a huge hug from an organization that has been family to me since I joined in 2002. 

I am not supposed to be doing anything online at the moment, as my book deadline looms, but I just wanted to share my Crystal Kite acceptance speech. I wrote it with a lump in my throat.

Here is the shortlist, and below, my speech.


Shortlist for the Crystal Kite Prize for Europe

The Crystal Kite Award
Thank you so much.

Before anything else, I’d like to say thank you, Natascha Biebow (regional advisor of SCBWI BI), who was the first person I met in SCBWI – luckily when I met her, I didn’t realize she was a commissioning editor at Random House or something embarrassing might have happened.

Thank you to all the members who voted for Tall Story. I am so honoured to be chosen for this award.

I hope everyone’s had a great first day of the conference – I remember my very first SCBWI conference. It was in Winchester and it was 2001. The keynote was Geraldine McCaughrean.

I was very nervous. I didn’t know anybody and I’d spent so many years being pregnant I was not in training to be sociable.

I was also nervous because I’d left the latest baby in the care of my husband and there were two big rugby games on that weekend.

But most of all i was nervous because I thought this was it. This was going to be my big break. In my bag I had all the picture book texts I’d ever written, ready to thrust at the first editor or agent I met. I figured that they were going to be overwhelmed by my astonishing talent and I was going to walk into that conference a wannabe and walk out, an author.

Did it happen?

Why, yes, I think it did.

I walked into the Conference a total beginner. I thought that that children’s books looked simple enough, surely getting published was going to be easy.

I thought I knew how to write – I’d been a journalist for many years.

But after the conference, I discovered two things.

1) Writing for children? Easy? No no no!

And 2) Writing for children was totally utterly the life for me.

That was ten years ago. Maybe I was a slow learner.

And so I began my quest. I attended all the conferences, signed up for the professional series, volunteered ... and as time passed, I became a better writer and i became a little bit wiser to the children’s book world.

The rejections also became a little bit better. They began to sound a lot more personal. Some were even handwritten.

Here’s one from a publisher that I keep pinned to my noticeboard:

Dear Mister Gourlay, Many thanks for sending us your manuscript. Although we thought it was a sweet story nicely written, unfortunately it is not quite strong enough for our list at this time. I’m sorry for the wait you’ve had for this reply.

Sounds familiar?

More than anything else however I was beginning to Get It.

• I GOT that Publishing is a business and editors and publishers are not just looking for talent, they are looking for a product.

• I GOT that There were a LOT of good writers out there, a lot of good writers who had ideas more brilliant than mine. I had to raise my game.

• I GOT that to give my writing a fighting chance, I needed a special something, a unique selling point, that set me apart from the rest. It took me a while but then I discovered what that special something was: ME.

• And finally ... I GOT that this long journey was not just about getting published, it was about LIVING A CREATIVE LIFE and all the striving, the struggling, the honing your craft, the finding the time, the rejections? That was part of the package. I had to stop yearning for the Creative Life because the Creative Life was NOW.


Early this year I was lucky enough to win a grant from SCBWI for my volunteer work. It was a grant to attend the New York conference. One of the keynotes was YA author Sara Zarr.

She described those dark, awful times when she thought her writing was ready but nobody was paying attention.

At a meeting with a literary agent, she couldn't speak, she was so close to tears. The agent told her:

The time between when you are no longer a beginner but you are not yet in the business is the hardest ... and one of the biggest frustrations is: no one can tell you how long this phase will last. Read Sara Zarr's keynote

That was so totally me (I’ll bet there are few in this audience who see themselves there too).

There came a point when I knew that I was ready. I had done my time at the slush pile. I DESERVED to be published.

But nobody was noticing me. Why was that? I spent some time blogging about it on my blog Notes from the Slushpile – if you can call whining, blogging.

By this time I’d given up on picture books and was writing novels. The novels were getting much more positive responses than the picture books ever did. Except at the end of a positive letter, there was always the comment: ‘But this is a quiet, literary novel and we cannot publish this at this time.’

When oh when was it going to happen?

I am not embarrassed to say I looked long and hard at self publishing – could I go through it without a publisher? But self publishing had such a bad press. I didn’t have the courage.

My husband tiptoed around me. He was careful not to use the word, but when I was feeling very very down, I tortured myself, asking: is this just a HOBBY?

Friends who knew I was writing would ask, how’s it going? Are you published yet? They listened politely while I explained that it was not a quick process – probably thinking, she’s just not good enough. Which was exactly what I was thinking.

My cleaner told me she was cleaning for someone who was also trying to get published. ‘She sits at her computer, writing all the time. Like you, she doesn’t comb her hair and wears rubbish clothes [Candy's note: Frances disapproves of my jeans and t-shirt approach to fashion] . Writing and writing and getting nowhere. JUST LIKE YOU.’ Thanks a lot, Frances.

Then one day Frances came in to work with a gobsmacked look on her face.

‘Oh my god, Meg’s book is going to be published!’

‘What’s her name again?’ I said.

‘Meg Rosoff.’

Rosoff? I’d never heard the surname.

But I soon did.

Then I won a place in the first Undiscovered Voices anthology. This is it, I thought. It’s going to happen.

I got signed by an agent.

This is it ... at long last ...

And then ...

Nothing.

The only difference was that it was my agent who was getting the rejection letters. The rejections said dystopian fantasies? We’ve had enough of dystopias. (It was 2008, before the current dystopian rush)

So my agent tried submitting my coming of age novel. Guess what the rejections said? It’s a quiet literary novel. Too quiet.

Then I wrote Tall Story. And just like that, the door opened.

And now here I am, up on a podium, talking to you.

It was official, I was living my dream.

Except the reality was not quite what I thought. Yeah, it’s been one of the best years of my life ... but it has also been one of the worst.

Here are the good things: I saw my book in the shops. I met my writing idols – Jacquelyn Wilson, Michael Morpurgo, Malorie Blackman – I had my picture taken with them ... whether they liked it or not.

I actually get fan mail. My Mum is proud of me. The Philippines is proud of me. Tall Story was shortlisted for eleven prizes.

But instead of enjoying every short-listing, I found myself panicking. I had to write my second novel but I was finding it hard to write, I just couldn’t find the words.

My blood pressure went sky high. I was grinding my teeth at night and my dentist was in despair at the damage I was doing. I was distracted and not paying enough attention to family things. Sometimes I was convinced that I would never write another book again.

It wasn’t writer’s block as much as writer’s freeze.

When I finally handed my second manuscript to my editor last summer, I knew that there were a lot of things wrong with it.

I went to a meeting with my editor, Simon Mason (author of Moon Pie, shortlisted for 2011 Guardian Prize) ... I armed myself: I prepared a synopsis, a step outline, I got ready for a technical discussion – cut here, paste there.

The first thing he said was: ‘It’s good, Candy.’

Uh oh. I thought. Here comes the BUT. BUT it’s not quite strong enough for our list at this time.

But Simon's been in the business a long time, he’s seen his share of second book blues.

So what he said was this:

‘When you approach revising this book, you must not focus on problems and fixing them. You must focus on what is GREAT about it.’

And then he sat me down and said, ‘... and you know what’s great about this book? It’s GREAT because of this ... it’s GREAT because of this ...’

For half an hour he just told me how great my book was.

I came out of there with my head spinning.

I stopped looking for failure. And when I began to focus on what was right instead of what was wrong, I found the book that I wanted to write.

A few weeks ago, Michael Morpurgo was asked in a Guardian interview: ‘What is the greatest threat to publishing today?

His answer:

‘Not giving room and space to new writers. They are no longer nurtured in the way that I was.’

Actually, I know many editors and publishers who believe in nurturing their authors, but times have changed since the days when editors fished their authors out of the pubs, paid their gambling debts and stood guard as their genius sat at the typewriter. The pressures publishers are under today - economic or otherwise – are mind-boggling.

And as for TALENT ... hah! Look around you. This room is FULL of talent. One thing I’ve learned is that in this business, Talent is not the bottom line.

You need a big idea, good luck, and PERSEVERANCE – LOTS OF IT.

David Fickling, my publisher, told me, ‘This is who you are now, this is what you do.’

But who am I? This past year has been such a whirlwind that I kind of lost track of myself.

Who am I?

I am that person who arrived at the SCBWI conference with all her hopes packed in a bag. I was looking for something ... and it was not just an agent, not just a publishing deal, not just tips on how to write ... I was looking for a way of life.

It’s not true that nurturing no longer exists in this business. Nurturing is what we do here in SCBWI.

This business is such a roller coaster ride and it’s great to have so many like-minded fellow travellers sharing the highs and the lows ... we mentor each other, cheer each other on, cheer each other up, and generally lift each other up to the next level.

So Thank you, SCBWI. Not just for voting for Tall Story, but for nurturing me.

The Outstanding Contribution Award


27 comments :

  1. So lovely, and so well deserved. I'm sorry not to have been in Winchester to share your celebrations, and glad to have the opportunity to read all this here. Actually, perhaps it's best I'm reading it instead. I'd only have been that embarrassing person in the front row sobbing. Very proud of you!

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  2. You were so missed and talked about (in the nicest possible way) ! Thank you!

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  3. Oh Candy, what a wonderful speech and what an incredibly journey (I recognise far too much of it, right down to the teeth grinding!). You are truly an inspiration. And ditto what Sue said, good thing I wasn't there either or my mascara would have poured down my face! If anyone truly deserves both awards, it is you. Proud to call you my friend and here's to you going from strength to strength xx

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  4. Yes, a wonderful speech! That list of 'gets' struck a chord too - I suppose because they are precisely what every writer needs to discover, whatever road they take.

    Congratulations!

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  5. I've never met you Candy, but I'm still proud of you. Great speech - and the prizes are clearly well-deserved. Congratulations!

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  6. What a beautiful speech! I wish I'd been there to hear it. Huge congratulations on your awards - so well-deserved - and anticipating even greater success for you in the future!

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  7. Congrats on your wins Candy. This is a lovely story and I'm sure many will see themselves in parts of it.

    Lovely to meet you, if briefly, at the conference. Looking forward to reading your next book. Best of luck

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  8. Massive hugs to you - two very well deserved awards xxxx

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  9. A fabulous post, Candy and congratulations again on your win.
    I think this post is a must read for all writers. I can identify with so much of this if not the getting published part.
    One of these days I hope I get the chance to meet you and other SCBWI writers.
    Wishing you all the best with your next book and for the future. Onwards and upwards!
    T x

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  10. It was a most moving and inspiring speech Candy - truly one of my most memorable moments from this weekend - and there were LOTS.
    Paul.x

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  11. Now, where are you going to put that trophy?

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  12. I agree with all that's been said. Truly inspiring. It made me feel warm in my belly then I realised it was the fires you'd stoked in there and not fluffiness.

    Great attitude, brilliant advice and a wonderful story. Good luck with the new book and the rest of your writing life.

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  13. I almost feel I was there Candy - what a great speech. You're a very fine writer, and an inspiration to all the membership, authors and illustrators alike.

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  14. Fabulous speech, Candy: love the part about the creative life being the goal, not publication.

    Congratulations on your double win!

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  15. Hi Candy
    Thanks for posting your speech. It was moving to listen to and inspiring at the same time. Great that you are sharing it with those who were not at the conference. We are all proud of you!
    Odette

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  16. And a standing ovation for an outstanding person. Many, many congratulations.

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  17. Thanks for posting this, Candy. I'm not ashamed to admit that it brought a tear to my eye when I heard you deliver it. The awards are so well deserved – you're an inspiration to us all.

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  18. Candy, you absolutely DESERVE that award. You do so much and it is really apreciated. Now, take a step back and FINISH YOUR BOOK!! (Saw the cover - it's wnderful!)

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  19. Congratulations, Candy! And thank you so much for posting this speech to share with those of us who weren't there. It's heartfelt and inspirational, and even funny! And so true and encouraging. Thanks for taking the time in your moment in the sun to support the rest of us, too.

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  20. Beautiful, Candy. Thank you so much for this. It's exactly what i needed to read tonight as I'm working on book 2. I needed the reminder to focus on what's GOOD.

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  21. Oh Candy, you brought a tear to my eye at the conference and you've just done it again - and I'm sitting in a cafe...That was a truly wonderful speech - moving, inspirational, generous and beautifully written - just what we would expect from you. Both awards were so well deserved - you are fab!!

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  22. Candy - Huge Congratulations, like Sue just wish I could have been there... and missed everyone so much. You've totally captured the roller-coaster of emotions on the writer's journey. And as I sit here feeling strangely homesick for the Conference - I like to think I was with you all in spirit! Christina :) x

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  23. Candy, oh Candy! I am so proud of you!!! This is just the beginning... and I pray for an even brighter, award-filled future ahead of you. They ain't seen nothin' yet! Go, go, go!!! :) Bravo! :)

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  24. Yes - lump in my throat a second time, after reading this again. The continuing struggle after publication, and that precious advice on revision from your editor, which I want to repeat like a mantra. "..you must not focus on problems and fixing them. You must focus on what is GREAT about it." YES. You are right...
    And I'll never forget this too "It’s not true that nurturing no longer exists in this business. Nurturing is what we do here in SCBWI". You illustrate nurturing perfectly!

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  25. A brilliant and beautiful and funny speech. Like you. Congratulations!

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  26. I love your speech! I have been struggling to finish my children's picture book and am studying a Hypnotherapy Diploma in an attempt to get over my fear of being creative and getting my stuff out there!! I felt quite emotional reading the bit about 'living a creative life'. Thank you for writing such an inspiring blog.

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  27. I love the speech. You delivered it very well. It's very inspiring and full of lessons. I wish I had been there too to hear the speech personally. I hope you all the best and congratulations on your awards.

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